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SlimMackenzie
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I know this story was posted a few years ago, but I have an opinion.
First of all, I loved it. I knew it was a short story, therefore there are different criteria involved. I loved the dialogue. You let the dialogue build the scenes, the moods, and at the same time, gave the characters depth. I am working on something as well, and if it is half as good, I will be content. |
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FinalExam
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Thanks for the kind words, man. This is one of the stories being considered for my collection with Sideshow Press, but we aven't hammered out the exact contents yet.
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